Friday, January 25, 2013

Shooting the Breeze With My CP's: An Interview With Dahlia Adler!


Hi Everyone!

So tomorrow just HAPPENS to be the birthday of one of my very favorite people and critique partners: fellow lover of YA contemporary and YA Misfit, Dahlia Adler! To celebrate, we're doing an interview!


You might know Dahl from the Twitterverse (and if you don't, go follow her right now: @MissDahlELama), or from her own blog, The Daily Dahlia, where she dispenses invaluable advice on writing and seeking publication, does fabulous interviews, and is generally a brilliant human being. She is repped by Andrea Somberg at the Harvey Klinger Agency, and is also a copyediting wizard, a sweet but thorough beta reader, and has the ability to organize a person's whole brain in three bullet points. Yes, she has done that for me. I'd be lost without her, and I'm going to pout when I have to share her sexy male mc's with the rest of the world, but only for a second. Because then I'll be too busy screaming my head off with glee.

Here's a chance for you to get to know Dahlia too!

G: First of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Are you doing anything special to celebrate?

D: Thank you!! Just keeping it small this year, having some friends over. Mostly I’m excited for whatever birthday cake my husband’s planning.

G: How long have you been writing, and what made you decide to pursue publication?

D: I’ve been writing since I was about eight or so, but I was always really shy about it and would never let anyone read my writing, and I honestly had no intention of pursuing publication. Then, about five years ago, my husband went to law school, and money got tight, and I thought, “Okay, maybe it’s time I actually see if I can turn this into more than a hobby, because we kinda need that right now!” I dipped my toe into the querying pool and never looked back, even though obviously now I realize that was ridiculous reasoning.
G: How many novels have you written? Do you have a favorite ms in your arsenal? 

D: I’ve actually written quite a few—four books for what would now be called a “New Adult” series, four YA standalones, I’m most of the way through a chick lit, and I’m writing another YA standalone right now. My favorite as far as what’s near and dear to my heart is probably the one I shelved prior to getting my agent—it’s called MY NAME IS EVERETT, and I just love the characters and setting so much. I wouldn’t say it’s my strongest, but it’s my “baby,” even though it’ll probably never see the light of day!

G: I know what *my* favorite Dahlia story is - BEHIND THE SCENES! Tell us a little bit about it and what inspired you to write it.

D: Aw, you’re just a sucker for a certain love interest ;) 
BEHIND THE SCENES is about a high school senior named Ally whose best friend, Vanessa, lands a starring role in a huge new TV show and gets Ally a job as her on-set assistant. Once on-set, Ally and Vanessa’s co-star Liam fall hard and fast for each other, but they’re forced to keep their romance behind the scenes so Vanessa and Liam can publicly date as part of a publicity stunt.    

I don’t remember what inspired the actual story, but I can definitely tell you a few random pieces of inspiration. One huge thing that brings Ally and Liam together is the fact that her father is terminally ill, and he’s experienced that with his own mother. In this case, I pulled a “write what you know,” and gave her dad the same illness (stage IV melanoma) that my father had. The aspect of Ally’s hating Hollywood because she’s watched her best friend struggle, being an Asian-American actress, isn’t from any personal experience—just a personal desire to call more attention to the insane lack of diversity in casting. The fake show was based on the new 90210 in my head, which is also where the character name “Liam” came from.

G: How difficult was it to write Liam and Ally's love story knowing he was really in love with me the whole time? (Kidding. Totally. Not really.)

D: Nearly impossible! Do you know how hard it is to tell a character, “Dude, focus on Ally,” when he just keeps screaming, “Giiiiiiina!!” from your computer speakers? Near impossible! Fortunately, I like a challenge, and I love writing romance.

G: That's right. I knew it. Ahem... BTS also got you your agent. What do you think is the most important advice for authors seeking representation?

D: 1) Get yourself some betas, and really, really think about their critique. I got incredibly tough crit on BTS, and sometimes it’s really tempting to brush it off and say, “Oh, whatever, those are just her opinions,” but I made the decision to work with it, and I think it’s a much better book for it. It’s also 10K longer, and I don’t think the pacing hurts for it at all.

2) Be aware of what writing opportunities are out there, and avail yourself of them! I got an agent through my first contest, and I didn’t even really know contests were a “thing” before that. But they are, and they’re fantastic. Just don’t overdo them—sometimes I see the same manuscripts entered over and over and can’t help thinking, “Have you really done anything to this since the last time? Are you working on anything new or are you holding on for too long?” Plus, it’s never really in your best interest to have agents know how long you’ve been trying to “sell” something.

3) Do your research on agents before signing. Not that this had anything to do with my experience, but I see now all these agents popping up with basically no experience, no sales, and people rushing to sign with them to add a line to their Twitter bios. It’s not worth it.

G: What do you strive for when you write? In other words, what are the things you hope to hear from your readers?

D: The best compliments are the ones that tell you that you’ve really gotten into someone’s head. If I can make someone laugh, or cry, or “swoon,” that’s the greatest. I get a lot of compliments on dialogue, and I love that, but lately I’ve been getting a bunch on setting, and those are really, really flattering to me, because I tend to set things in made-up locales. if I can make you picture a place neither of us has ever been… yeah, I’ll be pretty proud of that!

G: Tell us something that would surprise people to know about you. And not that you're awesome, because we already know that.

D: Ha, I’m such an open book that I’m not even sure what would surprise people anymore. I guess maybe that although I love books and TV, I’m so not a movie person. The list of movies I’ve never seen includes: Star Wars, Titanic, Dumb and Dumber, When Harry Met Sally, You’ve Got Mail, Sleepless in Seattle, Jurassic Park, any of the Harry Potters, any of the Twilights, any of the Lord of the Rings, any of the Supermans… need I go on?

G: Because I'm food-obsessed, I have to ask: Favorite flavor of ice cream? Favorite kind of cookie? Any food you absolutely positively can't live without?

D: Ohh, you are my kind of girl, as if I didn’t know that already! My favorite ice cream is Coffee Heath Bar Crunch—so, so good. Favorite kind of cookie is tough, but I think I have to go with white chocolate macadamia nut. There are so many foods I can’t live without I don’t even know where to start. I think chicken would probably be my number one.

G: Ben & Jerry are my heroes. Last question: How would you fill in this blank? If I see _____ in one more YA novel, I will scream.

D: If I see one more couple pair up after getting to know each other through a class project, I will scream. Loudly.

 Thanks for stopping by, Dahlia! Best of luck with all your writing endeavors and of course, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

It's Time For the #PitchWars Agent Round!


Pitch Wars is here! Pitch Wars is here!

Our teams have worked hard to polish their assigned manuscripts and pitches, and competition is going to be fierce!

You can check out my mentee's (Stacy Stokes) entry here, and be sure to cheer her and the other participants over at the YA Misfits blog!

We also have an alternates showcase of fabulous runner-up entries that shouldn't be missed.

Good luck to all those who participated!


Friday, January 18, 2013

I'm Still Here!

Hi Peeps!

I haven't gotten around to posting here at Writer's blog in a while, but I'm still here!

Today I'm talking about setting as inspiration (and my weird fascination with cemeteries) over at the YA Misfits blog.

Come over and join the conversation!


Monday, November 12, 2012

When Life Imitates Art: Changes in the Wind



I'm finding it pretty ironic lately that I wrote a novel about a girl who can't wait to get away from her hometown.

Especially since the hometown in said novel - despite the made-up name - basically *is* the town I've lived in for a good chunk of my life. I always thought that, like my main character, Kelsey, I'd jump at the chance to move somewhere more glamorous, someplace a little further from my roots.

Until the opportunity hit. Like a freaking tidal wave.

My husband's company announced last month that they're closing their corporate office in Connecticut and relocating to Georgia.

We knew it was a possibility though, granted, we didn't expect it to happen this soon. I'd always told my husband that if he was offered a position in Georgia, I'd move without question.

I was wrong.

The realization of how alone I will be has been hitting me like a hail storm. My entire family is here, and I'll be down there. By myself. Working from home while my husband goes to the office every day. Granted, I will probably get a ton of writing done this way but...

I can't watch movies with my sister anymore

When my whole family is gathered at my grandmother's house every Sunday for lunch, I won't be there

My little nieces and nephews will barely know me

If I finally have a child, no one from my family will be there to watch him or her grow up. Or help me.

I will literally be ALL. ALONE.

When I wrote LAST YEAR'S MISTAKE, I wrote it with my high school mentality that change was awesome (and yes, it can be). It's escape. It's a new chance, a new start, especially if circumstances haven't been the greatest. And honestly, if I'd been presented with this opportunity when *I* was in high school, I would've jumped just as quickly as Kelsey did.

But while I know this move could be a fantastic thing for myself and my husband, I can't help but marvel at how my adult worries and fears have made my reality so much different from my young adult fantasies.

Funny how things change in the real world, eh?

Have you ever found yourself facing a situation similar to one you'd written? Would you make the same decision as your character? And for the love, can anyone out there tell me some relocation stories with happy endings?






Monday, November 5, 2012

Freak Storms and Freak Outs, Oh My!


So those of you who follow my random rants and rambles on Twitter know that Hurricane Sandy hit Connecticut pretty hard. We were without electricity from Monday afternoon until Friday night - and strangely enough, it happened one year to the day after the Freak October Snow Storm of 2011 that also left us without power for days, which I blogged about here.

Being holed up at my in-laws house for three days left me with a lot of time on my hands, or at least more than I'm used to. And you know what?

I was less productive writing-wise than I would've been if I'd had to lie, cheat, and steal for time like I normally do.

I'd like to blame it on being cold and tired and out of sorts, all of which were factors, but the truth is...

It seriously freaked me out to have time to write.

Some people work better under pressure, and apparently I'm one of them. My words only want to cooperate when they're forbidden fruit, being covertly clicked out between phone calls and purchase orders and cooking meals and scrubbing toilets. Which begs the question - What the hell is wrong with them?

Is it just me, peeps? Or do any of you find that the moments you *can* write are the moments you'd rather do anything but?

On a more serious note, I'm well aware that four days in the dark is nothing compared to what some people faced after the storm. Many homes were destroyed, flooded, or vandalized. Here are some photos taken around my town - my heart goes out to those who lost much more than electricity.


This house is about two miles from mine. The worst damage I saw.



Tree in the power lines

Uprooted tree in front of my old house. I lived here during high school.

Mammoth branch that fell in our backyard - thankfully that was all.





Friday, October 26, 2012

When Plotting Meets Pantsing

Good Morning and Happy Friday all!

Today I'm over at the YA Misfits blog talking about being a Plotser - a Plotter/Pantser hybrid.

Hop on over and tell us about your writing style!




Monday, October 22, 2012

For the Love of Metaphor


I love finding metaphors in stories - it amazes me when something common or unassuming represents a much deeper meaning for a character as his or her story unfolds.

One of the recurring metaphors in my recently-completed ms, SHADOW PARK, is the sunset. And with a title like that, I should probably be embarrassed to admit that it was unintentional until the very end of the novel.

Those of you who follow me on Twitter know it makes sense that I'd find a way to make this everyday occurrence into something significant to my beloved main character, whether I meant to do it or not. Why, you ask?

Because I'm a little obsessed. And I have the pictures to prove it (All of these were taken with my cell phone):






Every night I stand by my front door and watch the sun sink into the horizon. It never fails to enthrall me. Stunning pinks and golds, clouds that appear lit from within, colors changing and shifting and igniting until the light finally dies. And I get to witness a new version of it, every. Single. Night.

The same and different, all at once. Endings and beginnings. Time moving forward.

Metaphor? YES PLEASE.

Your turn, peeps - tell me all about your favorite metaphors you've incorporated into your stories. Was it intentional, or happy coincidence?